For Christmas last year, my kind and considerate daughter-in-law gave me a book about writing, written by a real writer, Anne somebody.\u00a0 I appreciated the gesture but started to wonder whether my daughter-in-law’s message was, “I’ve read what you write and find it hard to believe you have been getting away with this all these years.”<\/p>\n
The thing is, I am<\/em> a bad writer!\u00a0 I admit it!\u00a0 I have a friend who is a good writer but I suck!\u00a0 One of my worst habits is using too many exclamation points!\u00a0 But I just can’t stop myself!\u00a0 Sometimes I use two of them at once!!<\/p>\n No, can’t write.\u00a0 Sentence structure awful.\u00a0 And, paragraphs.<\/p>\n Sometimes I start new paragraphs for no good reason.\u00a0 Other times I just keep writing the same paragraph with a brand new thought, like all the times I use the same word, such as times<\/em>, multiple times in the same paragraph.\u00a0 Any decent writer would spread some of those times<\/em> around to other paragraphs.\u00a0 But most times I don’t know better, since I am a bad writer times ten!<\/p>\n So there’s that about how paragraphs should be about just one thing, the thing that the first sentence is about.\u00a0 Good writers use vivid metaphors and similes.\u00a0 I can’t write a metaphor to save my life.\u00a0 Whenever I try to summon up a metaphor or simile, I just look longingly at the screen like a dumb dog that accidentally drops his treat down a hole and can’t retrieve it — he just stands there barking.\u00a0 That’s me.\u00a0 A dog without a metaphor.<\/p>\n I can’t use descriptive language either.\u00a0 Every time I try to use adverbs, I sound like Yeats (or Keats, whoever they were, I don’t know either of those poets and never did read their pusillanimous, cat-turds-in-a-lavender-patch elegies anyway) perched on a rotted crate in a dank tavern reciting the most fetid, repellent, putrefactive, smell-o-vision examples of amateur literary spittle one can find outside of Scarsdale, New York.\u00a0 Because that’s the kind of place Scarsdale is: adverbs run for City Council in Scarsdale and, amazingly, sometimes win.<\/p>\n Being a bad writer, as you now know having read me up to this point, requires much more (or less) than having limited writing skills.\u00a0 A crucial part of bad writing is having nothing interesting to say.\u00a0 Just like at the mall the other day.\u00a0 There was this guy walking around the mall, dusting benches and things.\u00a0 I thought he was going to ask me to move, because I was sitting on the wall of some empty kiosk waiting for my spouse to finish her purchase at the Hallmark store.\u00a0 But the guy just whiffed his duster over the bench next to me and then walked on by.\u00a0 I didn’t have to move after all, so I just kept waiting.\u00a0 Eventually my spouse showed up and we left, went home and had lunch.<\/p>\n Bad writing is also full of irrelevant material.\u00a0 By the way, can you believe that guy in the mall gets a paycheck and he doesn’t have to write anything!\u00a0 Not a thing!!<\/p>\n Good writers are concise and get to the point, but bad writers such as Yours Truly — and who calls himself that <\/em>anymore?\u00a0 Bad writers, that’s who!\u00a0 Or whom!! — often lapse into run-on sentences, going on and on (and on!!!) about some such banal topic which is only noteworthy because someone noteworthy uttered some utterly forgettable remark about it, the noteworthiness being that the person happened to be an old drinking chum of the late Christopher Hitchens, the erudite, well-befriended and well-saturated author who selected those he fawned over with particular care, treating Salman Rushdie, to cite one example, like Edward Snowden only wished<\/em> he had been treated, but Snowden had the misfortune to spring his leaks two years after Hitchens died and thus was denied Hitchens’ embrace, assuming that even would have happened or made a difference if it did.\u00a0 Am I right?<\/p>\n Everyone can tell how much hours good writers spend on there writing, because they’re hardly antsy mistakes in it.\u00a0 Grammer, spelling, punction, all perfect.\u00a0 As hard as I try to write without making mistakes, one or two.\u00a0 Always seem to excape my attention.\u00a0 I think my main problem is, get a better spell-check software!<\/p>\n They also say that the good writers close with a strong, satisfying ending.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" For Christmas last year, my kind and considerate daughter-in-law gave me a book about writing, written by a real writer, Anne somebody.\u00a0 I appreciated the gesture but started to wonder whether my daughter-in-law’s message was, “I’ve read what you write … Continue reading